Scene Critique
Your story is built one scene at a time. Let’s make sure each one pulls its weight.
Get targeted, professional feedback on individual chapters or scenes so you can revise with purpose, without committing to a full edit.
About the Scene Critique
Sometimes, you don’t need a full edit—you just need thoughtful, focused feedback on a single scene.
Maybe you’re testing out a new story idea, refining your voice, or polishing a short story before submission. Or perhaps you’ve rewritten a section after earlier feedback and want to make sure your revision works.
A scene critique gives you professional insight on a short piece (up to 3,000 words), so you can make confident choices in your writing and continue honing your craft.
It’s also a perfect complement to other services—like a developmental edit or line writing assessment—when you want to test your revisions or get targeted feedback on new material.
Price: $85 (USD) up to 3,000 words
If your scene is significantly longer, just let me know, and we’ll discuss your options.
Format: Microsoft Word (.docx) with tracked changes
Please export your file as a Word doc before sending. Don’t have Microsoft Word? No problem! You can use the free online version or download a trial to review the edits.
I do not edit in PDF, Scrivener, or other writing tools—please export your file as a .docx
Sample edit: Because this critique is short and focused, I don’t offer a sample edit. But if you’d like to get a feel for what my feedback looks like, I’m happy to share a sample from a past critique. Just send me a message!
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Genre fit: I specialize in fantasy, cozy mystery, and self-help nonfiction. Not sure if your book is a good fit? Just ask. I’m happy to take a look.
This Is for You If...
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You want focused, professional feedback on a specific scene or short story.
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You’re working on a novel and want to refine your scenes before diving into deeper edits.
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You’ve revised part of your manuscript and want to know if the changes resonate.
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You’re experimenting with a new genre, POV, or voice and want to see if it’s working.
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You’re looking to improve your craft without committing to a full manuscript service.
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You’re feeling unsure about the emotional or narrative impact of a key scene—and want clarity before moving on.
"Absolutely wonderful! Kind and helpful, yet did not hold back on her critique. She gave very detailed feedback with additional articles to help me improve in leaps and bounds. Will definitely be requesting additional services in the future!"
Michael, Fantasy author
The Process at a Glance
Here’s what to expect once you reach out to book your scene critique:
1. Booking
Have questions before committing? Don’t hesitate to reach out—I’m happy to help.
Once you’re ready to move forward, we’ll confirm your project timeline, sign a simple contract, and secure your spot with a 50% deposit. (Need a different payment option? Just ask!)
Please submit your manuscript as a Word document (.docx).
2. Critique Begins
I’ll review your scene (up to 3,000 words) and reach out with any clarification questions before finalizing feedback.
Then, I’ll complete a detailed edit—both developmental and line-level—using Track Changes and margin comments. You’ll also receive an editorial letter with insights on what’s working, what needs strengthening, and concrete revision suggestions.
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Turnaround is typically 1–2 weeks, depending on availability.
3. Your Next Steps
You’ll go through the edits and feedback, revise with clarity, and feel more confident in your scene’s direction and effectiveness.
And if questions pop up during your revisions? I’m just an email away. I’ll also follow up after delivery to see how you’re doing and offer support as needed.
Ready to Take the Next Step?
Request your booking below—I’d love to hear about your story.
Not sure if this is the right fit? No pressure. Just send me a message, and I’ll help you figure out which kind of feedback or support will best move your writing forward.
What You'll Receive
Your scene critique includes a focused, actionable assessment of a single scene or short story (up to 3,000 words), combining both developmental and line-level feedback. Here’s what you’ll get:
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In-line edits & comments
I’ll edit your scene directly in your Word doc using Track Changes, offering suggestions to improve clarity, flow, pacing, and emotional impact. My comments will also point out what's working well because you deserve to know that too.
A personalized editorial letter (1–2 pages)
This report breaks down your scene’s strengths and opportunities for improvement, with clear explanations and revision suggestions. You’ll get insight into:
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scene structure and value shift (does the scene move the story forward?)
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character development and voice
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writing style and tone
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pacing and tension
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clarity, consistency, and flow.
Next-step guidance
You’ll leave with clear revision goals—so you know exactly how to move forward with this scene and apply what you’ve learned to others.
Email support
Have questions after delivery? You’re welcome to reach out! I’ll also check in with you to see how your revisions are going.
Price & Dates
Price: $85 (USD) up to 3,000 words.
If your scene is a little longer, feel free to reach out. We’ll discuss options.
Date: We’ll confirm your project start and delivery date when you book. Once your critique begins, turnaround is typically 1–2 weeks, depending on the complexity of your scene and my current availability.
Need a different timeline or not sure if your scene is ready yet? Just reach out—I'm happy to help you figure out the best next step.
Ready to strengthen your scene and sharpen your writing skills? Click below to book your critique. I’d love to help you bring your story to life.
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